Scores and Comments
19.c.ft.100.800
Veterans Memorial & Multicultural Histories, Inc.
Application Details |
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| Proposal Type | Fast Track Project - July-December |
| Request Amount |
$2,500
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| Total Score | 244.000 |
| Average Score | 81.333 |
Panelist Scores
| Panelist | Excellence | Impact | Management | Total |
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| Grimsley Ginny | 87 | |||
| Grundy-Lester Gabrielle | 80 | |||
| Schnell Adam | 77 |
Comments |
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| Grimsley Ginny - Score: 87.000 | |
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+Under-served children + arts + veterans + multi-lingual/cultural!! WOW! +Strong partnerships (Library of Congress) and schools! +Strong use of grant funding in line with mission statement -concerned for financial stability without grant funding
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| Grundy-Lester Gabrielle - Score: 80.000 | |
| {No comments provided.} | |
| Schnell Adam - Score: 77.000 | |
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Please consider the use of formatting in your proposal description section; one giant run-on paragraph is not the way to make a compelling case for your project. Additionally, it is difficult to make sense of your request to hire professional editors and technicians when the whole purpose of your request is to inspire and educate youth in the skills of using video/film equipment. Also, I would like an explanation of your budget deficit from last year. |
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