Scores and Comments

19.c.ft.100.809

Artists Showcase of the Palm Beaches, Inc.

Application Details

Proposal TypeFast Track Project - July-December
Request Amount
$2,500
Total Score232.000
Average Score77.333

Panelist Scores

Panelist Excellence Impact Management Total
Grimsley Ginny 78
Grundy-Lester Gabrielle 80
Schnell Adam 74

Comments

Grimsley Ginny - Score: 78.000

+community contribution

-vague evaluation plan 

-first person "I" in proposal is problematic.

-Use of language like "All students welcome (color, race, religion, disability)" shows a lack of sensitivity to diversity and inclusion. "Underprivileged" should be "under-served" for instance. 

Grundy-Lester Gabrielle - Score: 80.000
{No comments provided.}
Schnell Adam - Score: 74.000
While I believe in the power of working with Master Artists, the proposal is extremely light on details as to who, what, where, and when. Without this information, and measurable objectives, we are left wondering how the applicant will achieve everything they wish to. Your website is incredibly articulate and this grant simply is not. I also think support materials would have helped greatly here.