Mission: vague and imprecise - not sure what your organization does. 

Based on impact/participation breakdown, it looks like the only involvement students/young people have are the drawings they do in their regular classes? Are there arts or content education materials that accompany that?

Students aren't included in the Salon event?

I don't see where the education is happening - the film sounds interesting, but how are people being educated with or through the arts in the making of the film? there's no plan for distribution or instruction to schools?

Diverse partnerships - great

Fiscally strong.

Using an out of state artist? Why?

Not sure how the sculpture project ties in.

Accessibility: states that everything will be 100% accessible... to whom? how? closed captioning? Braille materials? Sensory friendly for people on the Spectrum? "Accessibility" encompasses a slew of situations. Please be specific.