Scores and Comments

19.c.ps.114.346

City of Oakland Park

Application Details

Proposal TypeGeneral Program Support - Discipline-Based
Request Amount
$25,000
Total Score473.000
Average Score78.833

Panelist Scores

Panelist Excellence Impact Management Accessibility Total
Black Thomas 30 28 15 8 81
Geitner Robert 32 24 18 8 82
Iles Delma 20 22 19 8 69
Rodante Leigh 36 28 18 7 89
Sabo Jennifer 25 19 16 9 69
Young Elizabeth 32 26 17 8 83

Comments

Black Thomas - Score: 81.000

In general, this application lacks detail. The potential for strong programming appears to exist, but the application is not descriptive enough.

Geitner Robert - Score: 82.000
{No comments provided.}
Iles Delma - Score: 69.000

Goals, objectives and activities are all mixed together, not clearly defined.

No description of the actual activities - very vague.

32 artists - no artist bios

 

Rodante Leigh - Score: 89.000
{No comments provided.}
Sabo Jennifer - Score: 69.000

Add a stronger explanation of your programs, objectives, and partnerships.  The impact answer was very vague and does not include any hard numbers on economic impact nor statistics on educational impact.  This makes judging the impact very hard.  Make sure to explain how your programs, not just your space, are accessible and remember to use access symbols on your marketing materials.

Young Elizabeth - Score: 83.000
goals, objectives and activities could be further detailed. Accessibility section would benefit with more information on ages served, more concrete numbers for your proposed events... good work on all that has been accomplished.