Excellence:

• The data presented is very helpful in assessing this portion of the narrative.  Thank you for including the specific numbers in your objectives.  

Impact:

• Future applications may wish to incorporate objectives designed to increase the diversity of your audience.  Here, only a portion of the community appears to be served.
• The quality of life community impact is clearly quite large.  We should also see details relating to local economic development such as out of town guests, hotel stays, local dollars spent, etc.
• The specific numbers in the marketing plan are HUGE, thank you for including them.  Other applicants would benefit from this level of specificity. Does the organization do any direct mail campaigns?

Management:

• Thank you for including the strategic plan and student letters/evaluation in your supplemental materials!
• It would also be beneficial to see the audience survey utilized and ways in which the data from previous surveys is used to affect future programming/administrative decisions.